I'll Fix One Page on Your Site Tonight So More Visitors Buy or Book.
You send me one URL and your goal. I rewrite that page overnight so it's clear, convincing, and built to convert. You get paste-ready copy, clear instructions, and a short walkthrough video.
If you don't see a meaningful improvement in checkouts or bookings in 14 days, I'll redo it or refund you—your call.
Trusted by founders, agencies, and local service businesses.
How It Works (In One Day)
1. You send one URL.
Share the page you want fixed and your main goal: more purchases, more bookings, or more signups. Add 2–3 common objections and any must-use phrases.
2. I rebuild the page overnight.
I audit your current page and rewrite it into a proven structure: strong headline, clear offer, one primary CTA, safety/guarantee line, benefits, proof, and FAQ that kill objections.
3. Your team pastes it in.
You get a Google Doc with all the new copy, annotated screenshots showing what to replace, and a 2–3 minute Loom walkthrough. Your web person just copy/pastes.
Prefer to talk first? Book a 12-Minute Fit Call
What You Get When I Fix Your Page
New headline and subhead that clearly say what you do and who it's for.
Stronger offer block with one primary call-to-action (not 5 competing buttons).
Risk/safety line under your main button so it feels safe to click.
3–5 benefit bullets that finish the sentence "so you can…".
A simple "How it works" section that makes taking action feel easy.
Updated FAQ that answers real objections (price, risk, timeline, cancellation).
Paste-ready copy in a doc, plus annotated screenshots and a Loom walkthrough.
Your tech team doesn't have to guess. They see exactly what text goes where.
Deliverables
- Google Doc with all new copy
- Annotated screenshots
- 2–3 minute Loom video
- One round of revisions
Timeline
Same Night
Submit before 6 PM Phoenix time, get your new page in your inbox by morning.
Who This Works Best For
SaaS Founders
You're sending traffic to a homepage or pricing page that isn't converting trials or demos the way it should.
Agencies & Coaches
You sell retainers, packages, or programs and want your main sales page to feel clear, premium, and urgent.
Local Service Businesses
HVAC, med spa, law firm, contractor, home services: you want more calls and bookings from the traffic you already get.
Anyone Running Paid Traffic
You're paying for clicks and can't afford a page that confuses or scares people away.
If people land on a page and don't take action, this service is for you.
From Confusing to Clear in One Night
Most pages fail because they make visitors think too hard: vague headlines, weak CTAs, no safety net, and proof buried somewhere no one scrolls to. I fix those problems in one tight pass.
What I look for:
Does the headline say what you do in 5 seconds?
Is there exactly one primary action?
Is there a clear safety/guarantee line near the button?
Is proof (reviews, stats) close to the decision point?
Are objections answered before the form or checkout?
Vague headline:
"We help businesses grow"
Clear headline:
"Get 20% more sales calls from your website in 30 days — or we'll refund you."
I'll provide before/after annotations so you can see exactly what changed and why.
What Clients Say
"We gave Josh one page and 24 hours. The new version felt clearer, sharper, and actually made people click the button."
Sarah Chen
Founder, TechFlow SaaS
"Our booking rate went from 2% to 5% in the first week. The copy was tight, the structure made sense, and it was easy to implement."
Marcus Williams
Owner, Elite HVAC Services
"Finally, a pricing page that doesn't confuse people. Our demo requests doubled and the copy sounds like how we actually talk."
Jennifer Park
VP Marketing, CloudMetrics
I'll start this service with a handful of early clients at a reduced rate in exchange for honest feedback and anonymized before/after screenshots.
Simple, Flat Pricing
Fix One Page Tonight
One page: homepage, sales page, pricing, or checkout.
Rewrite into a proven, conversion-focused structure.
Paste-ready copy in a doc.
Annotated screenshots showing what to replace.
2–3 minute Loom walkthrough.
Redo or refund if you don't see a meaningful improvement in checkouts/bookings in 14 days.
Not sure yet? Book a 12-Minute Fit Call
Questions You Might Have
Ready to fix your page?